Very great poem i love it i hope yous work it all out im sure you 2 make the best couple 5/5

I like ur poem this is somethin i would need b cuz me and my ex-boyfriend are havin arguements i tell him that we can make it through but it didn't happen i jus had to leave him cuz there was to much arguing and i couldn't put up with it. But your poem is very pretty

I LIKE THIS POEM... ME AND MY GIRL ARE GOING THROUGH PROBLEMS RIGHT NOW AND ITS SORTA THE SAME FOR ME.... NICE POEM...

I like the way this poem has a realistic insight on relationships rather than the corny 'everythings perfect' image most people choose. well done