This is great-short and to the point.You really convey the emotion so vividly in so few words.One can just feel it upon reading it.You are quite talented.This really is impressive.

Great poem. its striaght and to the point! i see a lot of rage in it that im sure is dieing to come out. thank you so much for ur comment on my poem This Morning I Smiled. i am very touched knowing that my poem is impacting sum1s life and it makes me want to cry! im glad u and ur cousin enjoye dthe poem an dit only makes me want to continue writing in order to make ppl happy!

Sarah,

I like this as it is so concise and to the point and has displayed all your emotions clearly without any doubts. I too use writing often as an avenue to manage stress and I find that it helps greatly also for the creative juices to flow. Good work, keep up the writing.

Warmest regards,

Steve

If only we could say what we write :]
Nicely done, nevertheless. Straight forward & didn't hide behind too many lines. I hope your anger management helped :]

love.
Heather.