Awsome ... its so... deep thats wat poetry needs!!! KEEP IT UP

Exellent!!! very well done! you obviously know what your writing about!!! its very expressive, and i thought it was exellent!! well done

ruby

Im sorry dude clearly u have talent but this sounds like every other poem, i kno cos i used to write poems like these too. you say u can write well challenge urself try writing about something a bit more interesting it will take you further.
I hope u dont take this the wrong way, i do agree that u have talent
*Incognito*

Wow... This is very good. I really liked this piece of literature! It was filled with emotion! And I can relate a lot to this poem, so I guess it kinda went to my heart when I read it. Good job and keep up the great work!

~BJ~

Great job. well written, filled with lots of emotion, just keep your head up! dont let anyone put you down! take care!

That poem I think depicts (sp?) the sadness in life. I think that you captured it perfectly because thats similar to how I feel. You have a lot of talent and you are a great writer. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Wow! that was great i loved it keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

Very emotional and it sounds like it comes from your heart! Try not to repeat your words as much.. For instance "No One" was said about five times... Still a great poem though.. Keep it up..
!^I Love Being In Love^!

Its not my most favorite, but I still loved it. PLease keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed this. it was really great. so powerful. i have been there nice way to describe all the feeling. Great job.
Emma 5/5