by Athan Jan 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
We look up at the stars tonight, and together we make our wishes, mine to be a prince, and yours to be a princess. Your kiss is like a secret, waiting to be told, your hugs they represent, all that you withhold. Your eyes so bright your hands so soft, no words shall be spoken, of a love once lost, a heart taht had been broken. Ill give you the world, and ill give you u my love, for u are a gift, sent from above. God gave u me, a gift wrapped in gold, your love so true, your heart so bold. Ur very much so, the best thing in my life, all thats left to be, is for u to be my wife. As this poem ends, i get down on one knee, asking for an answer, thats life altering. I will look in your eyes, and the words will come out, i can whisper them, or i can say them out loud, but without a doubt, the words will be, i love you so, will u marry me. |
by NESS
Aaawwww that is so so sweet i would cry if some one said that or wrote that for me. ur so sweet. |
Awwwww this is so sweet I absolutely LOVE it!!! |
by kallie
How cute!! did you actually read this poem to her when you purposed?? nice work!! you can't resist if a guy says that!! keep writing!! comment back if you would!! |
by Crystal
OHHH that is really sweet. Great Poem. I hope it works out for you. Best wishes and Good Luck. I hope yall have a very successful marriage 5/5 |