Try

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jan 19, 2006


I think of ways to better myself,
I think of ways to end my pain,
I give up,
and give in,
This blade,
my best friend
I try and try
but it never works,
it never helps
nothings ever solved...
so why,
why try
if all it is,
is failure?
Its a never ending game,
do i give in,
or give up?
the thoughts scream
through me...
I HATE YOU
YOU'RE WORTHLESS
it hurts,
and i cry
while i grab the blade,
i have nothing left...
whats left to try?

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  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    So i dont really like these type of poems. contentwise

    but i do love this: Its a never ending game,
    do i give in,
    or give up?

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...excellent poem. i loved it. i can kinda relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Hey, Thats a real deep poem. I really felt what you were saying! Great work! Keep it up! 5/5
    Bec xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Very good, and very true. But things like this happen, they seem to take over our life, we dont know why we are cutting, we don't know how to stop, but we know deep down that it isnt the answer. Well written, good job
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Smilesunshine

    Thats amazing, your really good keep up the good work

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