by kallie
Wow what a great poem!! nice work!! i can't wait till i feel that way about a guy and he actually feels it back and doesn't break my heart!! love is about forgiveness thats so true!! i really liked it!! 5/5!! keep it up!! comment back if you would! |
by Carrie
This is really good.. I liked it... great write...5/5 |
by Natalie
Wow, Im shocked for words. That was excelent! Seriously, It really was! I loved, Now i can't wait till i fall in love =] lol 5/5 Great work! |
by Kaylee
Wow this poem was amazing and defined what I always wanted to know: What is love? You're a really gifted writer, don't lose that. I think the best part though was the note at the end: |
by Synh
I always see poems about how awful and horrid love can be but you taught many of us about the purity within it. Beautiful. Love it. |
by LuvMeAlwayz
It's pretty good |
by Sole
Excellent work - and so true :) Well done! |
Love is... complicated LOL... but really, nice work yet again! :) |
by Bridgette
I really like this.. you portrayed love well.. and it wasn't like the usual love poems. I really love the lines: |
by Jessica
Wow! nice flow, good descriptions, and lotsa emotion! what more could i ask for? great job! 5/5 |
by Jessica
Aww.. loved the way you wrote this! the repitition really worked.. great write! filled with emotion and so much thought! |
WOW! I love this poem!! It was amazing! The flow was excellent. I loved the topic! I think you really have a lot of talent. I love all of your poems! Great job!! |
by Rachel RTVW
What a beautiful free verse. Heartfelt and the message is great. Nice job! |
by Tammie
That's beautiful. I never thought that anyone could define the meaning of love; but now I know I was wrong. This poem, is the definition of Love. I could say you did an excellent job, but that is an understatement. There is no words, honestly, to me, to describe how great this poem is. Sorry that that sounds so cheesy, but I mean it. This is one of my favorite poem's of all time. Thank you for sharing your talent. 5/5 |
by Jenni
I really enjoyed this poem. I thought that your writing was exquisite in this poem. You described love so eloquently and you did it in free verse. wonderful job! I am speechless! 5/5 |