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My last comment was a bit random. but honestly its a gud poem and i neva knew dat dis girl cud write peotry. she i like and onion. many different layers.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU MY DARLING AND MANY HAPPY RETURNS. nice poem rhyming was appropriate, realistic outlook on life. loved it.

Well love, i know you said you thought this poem was crap but i found it to be quite playful and fun. i hope you don't take this to offence but i thought it was written in a way, simular to that of a child because of the flow. i especially liked this line 'Will it lighten the burden which I feel I must shoulder?' and also 'Well, I guess I'll have to wait and see, So I'll end here with Happy Birthday to me!!!'.

brad

P.S. I LOVE YOU MORE!!! and that's the end, and not before