Is this a dream part 3

by LuVlYlUfFlY   Jan 19, 2006


As i shut the card......

i reach out for his hand he moves closer and said "do you understand?"
i nod my head yes and slowly grab his hands we make contact a smile came upon his face he looked at me in the eyes i smiled back at him and my heart came to a stop then he moved closer and slowly pulled me up when he stands he puts his hands around me then we move closer and i put mine around him and we move into each other as we do this he grabs my hand and puts in on his chest then we lean in and kiss

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    I like this...its very sweet:) Kind of a reminder what its like to want someone for so long and then to have them when you never thought you could. You capture the moment really well:) Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I loved all three of them, they were all great, man I've wanted to write something like that but I just couldnt. Anyways 5/5, Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    I love the way u write ur poems an the way u put ur words really great read again 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by courtz; youliedyoubrokemyheart

    Omg that is such a sweet poem i wish i could rite something lyk that keep writing thats awsome i read all 3 parts well dun!!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    That kwel i thinkl the whole thing was writin really well 15/15 you hav a gift dont let people puit u down

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