I like ur poem this is the same thing that i said "i would't fall in love but i did" and now it hurts cuz the one i fell in love with left and now were not together anymore.

Hihi sounds familiar... i can relate to this soo much. wow... amazing job hun, as always. keep it up!
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Nice one tara, this is gd, i like it, and this is not one fof the best its your best i have to say

This is cute, and i know how you feel, depressing...but hey it's not like he's completly gone, i guess you have to learn to be happy with every now and then if you really love somebody...but yeah good poem i really liked it, no rhymes or anything just seemed real good job

I absolutely love this whole piece, especially the end.. Deserves nothing but a 5/5 for sure. Keep writing I can't wait to read more.

Take care, love.

*> : PainOfOne * blaine

Awwwwwwwww babes its so sweet and now i laugh *haha u fell in luv haha* soz jst had 2 get it out, fell weird dnt it.