Your Silver Named Blade

by Kirsty   Jan 19, 2006


I slipped into your worship so easy, clear-view
All I leave around are jagged edges, once new
And my lips are so deceiving
You looked to me believing
I want to run away from you and watch the world cascade
But I can't leave to you the world that we once made
So I turn towards your silver named blade
And rest upon the same bed we once laid

Soon this silver named blade
Becomes my comfort, my shade
Take my hand, follow me my love
To the bed where we laid

Exhausted scratching at my branded skin, red raw
And I descend into each word you breathe, your core
Together we'll be dreaming
I'll hold you just stop screaming
I want to lose feelings for you but your powers just too strong
I wish we could just vanish just us. To kiss you is that wrong?
So I turn towards your silver named blade
Touch your body of which for me was made

Soon I'm craving what you say
Undress me slowly, your way
Take my hand, follow me my love
To the bed where I lay

Let's make it where we lay....

*I bit of a juxtaposition, different emotions which clash...but thats how i feel at the moment...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sirkka / Selene

    Whew, So much emotions, how do you do this?

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    I love every word of it, its really touching, went to get me you know? anyway great job!-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    Kristy,
    Your talent for writing amazes me and far surpasses any skills I have in creating ways to express my feelings. I truelly congradulate you on such an accomplishing piece of literature. Amazing.... And the feelings you expressed in this poem, I've been there hunny.....

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    This is really good
    the contradiciting feelings work brilliantly
    i like the two word pattern after a line
    -hugs-
    lovexxx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I felt this was a good piece of writing and that although the feelings may have been a little mixed, i felt they blended in well within each other.

    Brad