by aaron c s Jan 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You asked me why I loved you, |
I really liked this poem as well and gave it a five. For this particular style and flow of the poem I think it would be better if you seperated the stanzas. |
by Alex Marlatt
Bloody 'ell I can't find much to critisize that was excellent |
Beautifully written.an amazing piece! love the rythm, the rhymn,and how this builds you are amazing. keep writing. |
by obsessedgurl
We need more people like that in the world....That is so sweet of you!!! |
OMG that is adorable!! Great poem and it flows nicely.. It sounds like it really came from your heart.. Keep it up |