OMG that is adorable!! Great poem and it flows nicely.. It sounds like it really came from your heart.. Keep it up
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We need more people like that in the world....That is so sweet of you!!!

Beautifully written.an amazing piece! love the rythm, the rhymn,and how this builds you are amazing. keep writing.

LISSA

Bloody 'ell I can't find much to critisize that was excellent

I really liked this poem as well and gave it a five. For this particular style and flow of the poem I think it would be better if you seperated the stanzas.