I'm crying...that was beautiful and exactly what my heart is crying...again you have an amazing gift never stop using it...5/5 love jess~

You are really good at verse. i'd like to tell you that somehow reading this makes it seem that there's a lot more you want to / could say. it builds up so beautifully and ends too soon!

just my view, pardon me if you think i am wrong.

your poems are also proving to be an enlightening read for me. thanks.

A most wonderful write Gary, bravo!!!

Tis a sad but very good poem gary, i think the title is excellent, i give it a 5/5!!!