OF HOPE AND DREAMS AND YOU

I thought it started off in a positive way but by the end I could read deeper and the sad atmosphere you have created is excellent. I like how this is short and to the point but still have heaps of 'layers' to it. I also enjoyed the structure, how it runs freely but is still controlled throughout. Awesome stuff :)

Wow... your poems are all so cool... these lines seem like they could be lyrics to a song... so good!!

Very heartfelt, my friend....truly beautifully written.

lvoe ya, Ann

I love the first two lines of this poem and those two lines force you to read the rest. I read every word of your profile and feel honored that you even read one of my poems. Thank You and I look foreard to reading more of yours.

Gary nice poem.. yours always stop and make me think. i love that you tend to draw the reader into your poems that is so cool i love the first two verses of the poem it is a really good way to start that poem awsome write!
take care, sarah