by Jess Jan 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I still can't believe it |
by Samantha
Wow.. i really loved the story you tell in this poem... it was really great... the flow was pretty good too, although it was a bit repetitive, but still good... and some of your spelling was a bit off like the word "alot" is actually a lot.. and i think in this line here: |