Wow.. i really loved the story you tell in this poem... it was really great... the flow was pretty good too, although it was a bit repetitive, but still good... and some of your spelling was a bit off like the word "alot" is actually a lot.. and i think in this line here:
"To being passionate
And making love a night" i think you meant at instead of a... overall though your poem was amazing and i think it deserves a five out of five... nice job and keep it up

sammie