I liked it, you're very good at writing poetry, wish I could write like that lol. Take care!!

Another awsome poem. I really liked this one and think that you write so beautifully. Keep it up. *5/5*

Well done. You are right, you are good at writng. Keep up the wonderful work. I will make sure I read more!

Juls

GOSH.. this is so sad.. i absolutely loved every letter of it!! im so sorry about watever it is that happened to u.. i hope u work things out.. i especially love the last parts of the poem.. gr8 job with the rhyme
keep workin
take care
thnx 4 rhe comments
Nouna

I really loved this poem. it was written great and it was just a great poem in general.
Emma 5/5

Great poem i like the message it gives to your friends ... just letting them know ... yea well yea
Love Always
NerdyPants

Oh my god... this is so good!

Oh my god... this is so good!

Aww that is really sad.. and i know what you mean by that. You did a great job on this.. The concept behind it was really good and the flow was good also. You are an amazing poet.. keep it up & stay strong!