WOW amazing poem.
great job 5/5 XXxxXXxx

This is an excelent poem ... there are a few things u could make it flow a little easier.. but hey pat ur self on the back it was great. well done 4/5

-faithfulserenity

Yeah that was awesome hun I loved really great. I feel that way someitmes but thats life. greate poem, xoxo Rach