Nicely done. some fantastic word play. and it's so very true. i liked this one. great write.

This poem is beautiful . it really speaks of the truth, about how everything, ur an amzing writer.

This is a very expressive short poem, each statement makes a huge impact alone and together they form a very deep obsevation on life.
It is good to see someone else from Scotland posting on the site,
*VioletRaven*