by ÀvÃL
This is a really good poem i loved it |
Loved it, I can relate |
by VioletRaven
I felt great empathy for you in reading this poem, it should not be that we feel we must apologise for being who we are, or turn to extremes to escape the pain of living. |
" im sorry for being me" |
by *~Emma~*
Wow, i really felt the emotions, (the pain) within your words. this poem is amazing! well done |
by deanna
I feel the same way sometimes. i loved this poem it was great! I felt the emotion that you put in there, "I try to act like I'm ok, but it's getting hard to fake..." that's exactly how I feel! keep up the good work |
by Cuddles
I'm gonna cry. This is so sad, and yet, so beautifully expressive. I love this poem so, so much. |
by Falling Up
I love this poem. it shows that, some people may see others as a burden in their life, yet really, they arent that way but they dont realize this untill they are gone. i have enjoyed all your poems, though they are all sad and dark, i still enjoyed them equally |
Simple rhymes, but very powerfull and full of emotion. again using the metaphor of the "forbidden door" |