Comments : I'm sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by ЀvÏL

    This is a really good poem i loved it
    all i can say is that i feel your pain and i think you should keep writing because you are great at it lol

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Loved it, I can relate

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I felt great empathy for you in reading this poem, it should not be that we feel we must apologise for being who we are, or turn to extremes to escape the pain of living.
    I found this a deeply touching poem, I hope that you find within yourself the strength to defy the world which tests us.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    " im sorry for being me"
    such a sad but powerful line
    great poem
    very touching
    xxxx much love
    emily

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    Wow, i really felt the emotions, (the pain) within your words. this poem is amazing! well done
    luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by deanna

    I feel the same way sometimes. i loved this poem it was great! I felt the emotion that you put in there, "I try to act like I'm ok, but it's getting hard to fake..." that's exactly how I feel! keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I'm gonna cry. This is so sad, and yet, so beautifully expressive. I love this poem so, so much.

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I love this poem. it shows that, some people may see others as a burden in their life, yet really, they arent that way but they dont realize this untill they are gone. i have enjoyed all your poems, though they are all sad and dark, i still enjoyed them equally

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Simple rhymes, but very powerfull and full of emotion. again using the metaphor of the "forbidden door"

    another great work!