Temptation

by martha shaw   Jan 20, 2006


Underneath the desire.
Nothing can take you higher.
Wondering dreams found,
just look around.
Never dare to escape,
let passion take it's shape.
In a tender soft instance,
just don't think of pain.
And let the unthinkable explain.
Feel it inside,
and you can only decide.
It's like a burning flame,
Never was it a game.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I hope you got a hobby 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Nice poem. it had good meaning to it but the flow was a little rough. but keep up the good work.
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nice job with this... I think that it would flow a lot better if you added some punctuation... It would help the reader be able to feel the flow a lot easier... Other than that a very cute poem and well thought out... Very, very nice job... Keep it up

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This is a cute poem. I really like it. Keep up the good work.

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