Fall to the Sky

by Darien   Jan 20, 2006


Fall to the Sky

Breathing becomes harder,
as the air gets thick.
A rush of adrenaline,
my heart beats quick.

All civilization,
seems far from here.
Looking down at it,
my greatest fear.

I can touch the clouds,
on this mountain of snow.
A hundred miles high,
I dare not look below.

I kiss the earth,
this leveled ground.
Being up high is cool,
but not looking down.

It's really neat,
seeing all these sights.
The fact of the matter is,
I'm afraid of heights.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I'm also afraid of heights...This is a very cool poem, very original and well written.

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    THis poem was short but too the point. I love how you described how someone basically feels when they are afraid in the start your details were alright and the ending rounded out the whole poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nicely written... Very well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Nice rhyming and very witty presentation of the story. The rhythm was solid and didn't miss a beat, as far as I could tell.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Lol... I'm afraid of heights too =P

    Awesome poem though. It was really different from all your other ones, But good! =D 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

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