Wonderfully done!

Well Darien, I can so relate to this write. I was actually getting dizzy just reading it. Wonderful job......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)

Amazing write Darien. A fear most of us have, although I like heights a part of me keeps me away from the edges... Confusing I know!

Hey darien. g0od j0b 0n this piece

l0ve always d0ra
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Nice...

Ha! I liked the end. That was good poem. keep it up.

To a certain extent im also afraid
of heights and i can tell you that poem made me feel as i was conquering my fear . . . as if i was standing on that mountain .. . . W.O.W

Great ^^

Lol... I'm afraid of heights too =P

Awesome poem though. It was really different from all your other ones, But good! =D 5/5

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Nice rhyming and very witty presentation of the story. The rhythm was solid and didn't miss a beat, as far as I could tell.

Nicely written... Very well done!

THis poem was short but too the point. I love how you described how someone basically feels when they are afraid in the start your details were alright and the ending rounded out the whole poem.

I'm also afraid of heights...This is a very cool poem, very original and well written.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby