I personally think this poem is pretty good. its short but expresses so much! awesome!

Emma darling I love this! do dont say its not go or.. ill tickle you! lol -hugs- keep it up

And wrists smudged with scars
From my addictive little sin.

I like that for some reason, w00t
love yeh
Jenn

Hey bAbe really k0ol p0em i luved it~~!!! 5/5 i h0pe everything is ok....luv ya l0tz

Hey i thought this poem was good and i think its fantastic you had the strength to let out what you were feeling. IT takes guts keep up the great poems.

Yeah...obv it takes guts to admit that u have a problem...bit upset that u feel like ur having to cope on ur own tho...but i supose theres only somany times me or stacey can tell u we are here for u without you feeling like ur listening to a broken record. Nice rhyming xxx

Girl dont think this poem is anything other than amazing. Really its very good i think it describes your situation as well as othersd very well. I lvoe it your work is amazing.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Powerful poem...It's been a few weeks since I last cut and it has been hard, luckily my friends (the ones who know) are being really supportive. I'm still unsure of how long I can keep this up but so far it's going well...Keep up the excellent writing =]

I disagree with you, Emma. This is a really good poem, admittedly not your best, but still really good. Maybe I just understand it better than you think most would, but I do disagree with you. It's full of sorrow and pain, but I like it.

Thanku for the comments every1! xxxx

Its very good! i love all of your poetry..they all flow so well

It is good, is really good, awesome in fact xxxxxx woowoowoo sainsbuys

Just a quick one; you said in my poem about nat about him living with the guilt. I hav to say i dont care, tho. If it had been a normal accident, he had stayed at the scene and helped, then fine, we could hav got over it. He ran away tho, emma, he left them both there. It was a conscious decision and that sickens me. Yes, accidents happen, but only a cruel, depraved person could leave two young girls dying on their own in the dark. So, I have to say I disagree with you.

Actually, on rereading your poem, this one, I can't help but feela little hurt. I don't mean for you to feel bad or anything, but if I or stacey wrote a poem like this, you would feel hurt as well.

That was a great poem, and I know how you feel, if you need to talk then mail me. 5/5
Luv Helen xxx