Comments : One look and I am lost

  • 18 years ago

    by Love_Killed_you

    Wow this poem was really good, mostly because i can relate. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    Wowzer!!! *huggles* brillo pads, loved this bit:

    This treacherous journey
    Has begun once again
    All because god created
    Evil personified in men

    *evil giggle of agreement*

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Awesome, ggod job

  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    Wow! how can you have poem after peom about the same emotion (yeah...,threes not that many i guess) and still make each one origonal and soo different in how its expressed. you really are such a talented writer. you must write lots! continue to blossom! he he. never stop?
    xxx