by Shawna Jan 20, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
My friend is there for me |
Hey I'll be honest - it isnt fantastic but it isnt bad. To me it seemed you were just aiming to rhyme which is never a good thing because poetry isnt always about rhyming. However I often write not so good poems for my friends just because they are my friends maybe thats what this is? Either way I can see a lot of potential and if you keep writing i'm sure you'll go far. =) |