by J Lau Jan 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
If time cheated you from fate |
ITs easy to understand exactly what your |
Wow I know exactally what you mean.. if you loved someone you would do anything for them even move mountains.. and if it wasnt possible you would find a way. Interesting job. I really liked how it didnt have any sort of rhyme scheme, because it made the emotion that much stronger and intense. I loved it every image was stronger than the next and it made me feel powerful. Nice job. |
This seemed to be more of a speech than a poem to me... It had a very nice message to it, but I feel as though rhyming could've helped it seem more... poem-like. 4/5 |
by Jenni
You are a very good poet. There is not much free verse that I find to be written so wonderfully. This poem had such strong emotions and you portrayed them so passionately. wonderful! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this, I thought that the wording and imagery were wonderfully done. |