This is very good I love it and I understand it very much so keep up the good work 5/5

Great work. I like it. Keep writing you are good at it

*Julie~

Its really good...makes you think too

Good work here! It really makes you think! Keep it up!

also, thnx for the comment :)

*~peace and love~*

*~Amanda Hope~*

Such truth in this poem. One of my favorites.

I liked this one it came out good. It did not keep me interested the whole time but ended good.

Wonderfully written, keeps the reader interested. good job. Keep up the amazing work.

Nice, I agree ^^ the reader is always desperate to read the next section, as soon as they finish the first. . . that's a hard skill to learn, or master - or even knowin the first place! Excellent poem, loved it.

Peace. [Sole]

Excellent! This is my favorite one of your that i've read do far. It flowec nicely and kept me wanting more the whole time. Great job! 5/5

Your poem is wonderful! You had my attention on edge the whole way through! A tuff skill to learn might I add! My only idea for this poem is that you try not to use so man FULL sentances in each line... It kind of throughs it off a bit. In other words you don't need all the filler words like "THAT, and," Stuff like that! It might make the poem read more smoothly. But other than the reading smoothly you have everything else to perfection!! 5/5 Your an amazing writter

Wow.. this really made me think, good job! this really kept me on the edge of my chair the whole time! flowed well and good emotion, nice job!

Wow this is just great. I loved this poem and it is so true about what you wrote. 5/5

I liked this, I thought that the wording and imagery were wonderfully done.
The emotion behind the words written are clear for all to see.
I think you did an excellent job with this.

You are a very good poet. There is not much free verse that I find to be written so wonderfully. This poem had such strong emotions and you portrayed them so passionately. wonderful! 5/5

This seemed to be more of a speech than a poem to me... It had a very nice message to it, but I feel as though rhyming could've helped it seem more... poem-like. 4/5

Wow I know exactally what you mean.. if you loved someone you would do anything for them even move mountains.. and if it wasnt possible you would find a way. Interesting job. I really liked how it didnt have any sort of rhyme scheme, because it made the emotion that much stronger and intense. I loved it every image was stronger than the next and it made me feel powerful. Nice job.

ITs easy to understand exactly what your
talking about
i love it because its powerful
and there is alot
of emotion in it
i also liked
the imagery
good job

5/5