I miss you daddy (reposted)

by Erinn   Jan 21, 2006


Daddy why'd you have to leave me,
all alone here,
so broken and hurt inside,
with so many fears

I was only seven,
and sissy was only two,
we'll both have to grow up,
missing and wishing to be with you

It was seven in the morning,
when mommy woke me up,
and told me daddy was killed,
by a crazy man with a gun

Two years later,
I found out the man had been drinking,
he took my daddy away,
without even thinking

Cause if he had been thinking,
he wouldn't have took my sweet daddy away,
but i still have hope,
that I'm gonna see him again in heaven one day

Its been 8 years,
I still think about him all the time,
but i still don't see,
why someone could commit such a crime.

This is a true story... I lost my dad by a man who was drunk and had a gun.. The man didn't go to jail/prison. I'm 15 now and my sister is 10 we still think about him everyday. i would really appreciate It if you would vote and comment! thanks.. Oh and i know i sorta should go under sadness/death but i lost a loved one so i thought it would fit better under lost love

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  • 18 years ago

    by maggie

    Hey, you poem is amazing. I am so sorry to hear about your dad. I lost my dad back in January and it is very hard. Im so scared about the future without him. I just wanted to ask you since you were pretty young when your dad passed away, was it difficult having to go most of your life so far without your dad, because my little sister is only 6 and I'm so worried about her when she gets older. Alright well bye. And again amazing poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Great poem and it is so sad that u lost ur dad that way but just remember he is olny a prayer away heis always watching over u take care and great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    Hi very sorry for your loss i read your poem it gave me tears in my eyes, im 15 to, just wanted to say great poem!

    kayla

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