Ohhh hunnie that wss really sad but i loved every line of it, very nicely put together. xoxo Rach

Wow that was sad but beautifully written. keep it up
luv ya
amy

Wow thats great, really well written

Thats a really good poem...sad but realli good....especially love the part..

i hear the lies
and remember what you said
i just hear them
over and over again

PuNk PrInCeSs (LiSa)

I really liked how you were able to keep me glued to it and i didnt lose interest for even one second throughout the whole thing. thats really amazing. i hope its not based n something real. if it is im so sorry for you. good luck, keep up the god writting