Oh that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I luved it especially:

On thrones of ice
and roses thorn, listen,
echos speak, they say to me
nothings left to fight for.

Awsome work Kelly! Don't be sad....plz?

I liked it. The only problem with it is in the 3rd stanza, 2nd line you have on one instead of no one. Other than that it is good. Keep up the good work becuase you have alot of talent. *5/5*