WOW!!! OMG!!! This poem is amazing!!!!
great use of words and descriptions!!1
excellent job!!
5/5 without a doubt!!
love jess XXX

Wow. i loved the style it was diffrent but i had a great flow. i really enjoyed this.
Emma 5/5

Very vivid and direct i like it and i understoond it ahah 5/5 {heart} lissy:)