Comments : A Lover's Midnight

  • 18 years ago

    by Emi

    Beautifully Written 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Sounds like a perfect night!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This poem makes my blood race.. i love the tension of affection
    We'll press harder against the side of the car
    Come closer baby, this is once in a lifetime
    gosh that raises the heat :] well i deff liked the line..
    A wink, a smile, a kiss that lasts for hours
    that really shows the intensity of the poem. nice work
    take care, sarah