My Friend

Knife in my hand
already swallowed the pills
this is not fiction either
iv honestly lost the will
tonight is it
iv honestly had enough
I'm sick of all the taunting and teasing
I'm so scared
this is it
eyes getting blurry
slits on my wrists
breathing short and sharp
i want to scream
blood burning through my veins
this is one extreme
madness has taken over me
this pain isn't my satisfaction
one too many doses
i think i have an attraction
blurry and crying
this is the end
and you know why?
cause you hurt me my friend

*Hey guys Amy here. this one is really shitty (just a random whatever comes into my head rough copy. dont worry I'm gonna fix it up and improve it dramatically when i get a chance. thanks 4 reading it thou
love ya's Amy

oh PS can u still comment n tell me the main areas i gotta work on? thanks!