Oblivion

Great poem again, still short and to the point. still very deep and full of emotion, I loved it!!
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~~Sweetie

Hey this is good....very deep indeed, i really like such poems..short/simple/very meaningful..its like couple of words with thousand meanings.. :o)

liked the way u wrote it.

great job...and i really liked ur profile too..very honest.
right in my fav list.

take care and all the best

Very short, but precise. i love it. i believe i have felt this way plenty of times. you are a great writer.

alwayz,
*ophelia*

I really like this one.It is so simply stated yet says so much and I can totally relate to the emptiness and a feeling of non-existence,the desire to fade away, can't say how many times I've felt this way myself.Very sad but nicely constructed, the emotion really comes through so strongly.