I really like this one.It is so simply stated yet says so much and I can totally relate to the emptiness and a feeling of non-existence,the desire to fade away, can't say how many times I've felt this way myself.Very sad but nicely constructed, the emotion really comes through so strongly.

Very short, but precise. i love it. i believe i have felt this way plenty of times. you are a great writer.

alwayz,
*ophelia*

Hey this is good....very deep indeed, i really like such poems..short/simple/very meaningful..its like couple of words with thousand meanings.. :o)

liked the way u wrote it.

great job...and i really liked ur profile too..very honest.
right in my fav list.

take care and all the best

Great poem again, still short and to the point. still very deep and full of emotion, I loved it!!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
~~Sweetie