The Sweetest Kill

by Void   Jan 21, 2006


The Sweetest Kill

An enchanting touch
Will lead me to the night.
Take this soul capture,
I put up no fight.

His eyes are no windows,
But a one way mirror
Reflections of myself,
He notices so clear.

An entrancing touch
Will blind me of reason.
I'll fall for him fast,
He'll commit love's treason.

His voice sings a melody,
As it whisper in my ear.
Decieves me with words,
With all I want to hear.

An endearing touch
Will gracefully kill me.
Take the heart
As I wither in false dream.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow i loved this line

    His eyes are no windows,
    But a one way mirror..

    amazing line!!! it put so much effect on the poem .. i loved it once again 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    His eyes are no windows,
    But a one way mirror
    ...

    I LOVE THIS!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    The name of this poem caught my eye and I started reading. It was amazing. The title was creative, and the poem flowed really well. The ending was really good too. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    Wow, this poem was aswum! the emotions are so strong and you express them well! great job
    luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Hey steph I really like this one. I can't wait til you put it as a song. Anyway nice job 5/5
    -Vino

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