Wow... i love it... it's simply great...
keep writing more songs...

much love,
ipsita

Hi Nitin,

that was great!
i like that u keep on trying new things.
this song of urs is great dear. keep it up!

take care
Bharti

Wow, I definately felt the hatred in that one. Nice job! I can't imagine what it would sound like as a song, it would probably work so well, and everyone who listens to it would feel each and every word as they were spoken. Great job!

Wow... I'm speechless! What an amazing piece of work you did here. I loved it, specially the ending. I can soooo relate to this song of yours, word by word. Excellent, Excellent job!

Really good peice, each word seemed to prefectly flow into the next. the end was esspessially good.

5/5

That is good nithin! so sad and so good. i like your description of fabricating life.

thanks a lot for your nice comments. it means a lot when someone out there reads one's work and appreicates it. it is great to belong to such a wonderful community.

good luck and peace
shobhana