Hidden under the knife

by Raquel   Jan 21, 2006


No need to tell me i am loved
i have known my entire life
i have always had many friends
and rarely ever been in strife

and yet still i wonder
why am i sitting under this knife
wanting the pain, feeling my blood
so close to ending my life

i have a hidden side to me
which no one has ever seen
I have hidden inside a mask for so long
i have never found out who i could have been

dont blame yourself
for you were always there for me
this is just the one pain
that doesn't have control of me

i wont go all the way i promise
the thrill, the excitment
how i wish i could have only
faked a smile for a little longer

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Thanks for reading my poem. this was a heartlfelt emotional piece and it was written with great talent keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow I dont know what to say, just that it was really good, and I really liked it...Thnx 4 ur comment on my poem...

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    It's pretty good, impressive even.. I like the way you say:
    don't blame yourself,
    for you were always there for me.
    this is just one pain,
    that doesn't have control of me.
    brilliant!

    take care,
    ~* TasH *~

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