U just blew me away with this one..spl the ending..

"The tears won't come tonight, you say inside your head,
'Cause this afternoon I'll be gone, tonight I will be dead."

this is just so outstanding...really loved it dear...keep writing...if not for u..then for me as i m addicted to ur poems..:o))

take care and all the best forever

Great poem keep it up

Ohhh hun that was really great i loved every word of it. u r so talented girl. keep up ur awesome writting. xoxo Rach

Holy man, that is really good...i can kind of relate to that...good job...you are good at writing poetry :P take care and thanx for commenting on mine, that meant so much to me!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Beautiful Natz. Loved it. Very well written and 100% truthful. Reminds of me of what I go thru everyday!!
Love ya!!
Your Baby

I LIKE THIS POEM..I LOVE THE ENDING HOW UR SAYING UR ALIVE BUT TONIGHT U WONT BE ..ITS VERT GOOD

Girl this poem its hecka good its very deep and thought full
love it

Ur poems just blow me away with the wind like i have wings and can fly to the sky :)
-say goodbye and go

There has been times when I've cried myself to sleep, wishing not to see another day.....so this poem makes perfect sense to me. A haunting piece thats very well done.