That waz sooo good. Keep up the good work!!!

Can I say OMFG? That was great!!! Relates to me alot!! I loooooove it! Great job

That was a great read i h8 it when other girls do that but i hope your ok keep it all up love ya 5/5

Wowww that's great!!!!!,, much better than mine ^^ i'm sorry if the are similar, i had no idea.. i just wrote it after i talked to him & hmm.. you know the ending.. Xx

That was amazing... keep it up! 5/5
and thnx for the comment =]

I love the comments from all the the youngin's from your generation but let me say that you are an extremely POWERFUL writer for your age (or any age). I love to write and thanks for commenting on my poem but you are so intense in your writing. Such passion, such conviction and oh so grown up. Slow down girl..........your mind is well above your maturity.

I would love to say "good job" but there is so much muscle in your writing that praise can easily go unexpressed. Write a book - you got it girl.

Excellent Work! I give you 5/5!
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