This poem is alright you should add more and

When you're little, you lie about your age--making yourself older to sneak into movies...when you're older, you lie about your age, too--but to get a discount

that is an excellent quote made me laugh..lol your quote got 5/5

Oooo....is tis about B or A??????? lol its really good and NO i'm not being biased caz im ure best friend. lol. But yea add more.....the delima rises. lmao
~*tess*~