Your poem was okay... what experience made you decide to write it?

This is really good, really nice flow and it's got that kind of lack of structure and breakiness that I go for with my poems, which is my preference really, i'm not too much of a fan of over-used and often forced rhyming couplets, as they just become dry and can often do as much harm to a poem as good, in my opinion anyway. Just preference I guess? Anyway, another spell binding read my friend, keep it up. :)

I LIKE YOUR POEM ITS AWSOME !!!! i loved how you worded it like that. keep em' coming !!!!!! :)

I love it

Without the clouds
We would never see rainbows

I luv it! thats so good

Your poems I always look foward to reading. You have such a talent for writing, and if you let it, it will take you far.

Gotta say i love it .. i find some new poets here who seem to have alot of great ideas and the potential of great writes but like myself need alot of practice .. its nice to find someone experienced .. how long have you been writing ? .. i only have one poem up but your criticism is greatly appreciatted

much love and grattitude
~ *Kate

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I’m speechless Mr. Great poet! Aye, that’s what I’m gonna
Call you from now on.

Mr. Great poet, Mr. Great poet
With your poems, you make me amazed
Am in awe, empty of words
While at your poems I gaze.

Lots of love,
marjan

Very good poem..keep up the good work..~Brittany~ 5/5

I didnt really like it it was kinda boring
but i guess its ok

Good job

Neat!! keep it up!