What Do You Do

by Lauren   Jan 21, 2006


What do you do
when the one you would give the world to
doesn't really care about you?

and what do you do
when you wish on every. single. star.
every single eyelash.
every single 11:11.
and your wish never comes true?

because this is me...and i don't know what to do.
so i keep on wishing.
and hoping.
and dreaming.
that maybe you will realize you love me too.

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  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Hey amazing poem.. the 11:11 really hit home. keep it up
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    Haha that is sooo me and so true, hey so sorry about your bf but take if from someone that has been there he probably wasnt even close to the guy that is just waiting for you. and you will find him, until then use the way you feel to keep writing beautifully.thank you for the comment i love gettting them lol

    keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

    -laura

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Hey good to know you write it all down good poem 3/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I loved it.. I totally know the feeling.. i was going threw the same thing.. where i would wish on absolutely everything and nothing came true.. you completly captured my feelings on this great job 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Nicely written. Good work.
    As always~ Kate

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