This is excellent...I really know the feeling...I'm kind of going through this same thing...I really hope you get through this okay...take care...

Wishing.. oh what can i say
i liked this poem alot ^___^ thx

Really nice, girl I feel like this too...
=( I miss my hubby so much.. and I wish I can make him realize everything.. but yea I like this poem it's great. Keep writing, tc. Peace~

That is so true, you summed it all up, that was really good

Nice poem XD

I love this poem! To tell you the truth I love all your poems! I like how you write them! Your good!!!! 5/5
Cindy

K sooo....theres a guy...he comes into your life...hes perfect for you...when it happens...hold onto him forever...dont let him go becuz i know it will happen...from the looks of your poem you are an amazing girl and you just need to be and FEEL loved...so thats how it goes...great poem tho...i loved it but dont wish so much! make things happen! lol

Somethines things happen for a reason n your not saposta have what you think you are saposta have...
keep your head up n the best things will come your way!!!!

That's really good i can relate to it...love all your poems
keep strong love
xxx

Nicely written. Good work.
As always~ Kate

I loved it.. I totally know the feeling.. i was going threw the same thing.. where i would wish on absolutely everything and nothing came true.. you completly captured my feelings on this great job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Hey good to know you write it all down good poem 3/5

Haha that is sooo me and so true, hey so sorry about your bf but take if from someone that has been there he probably wasnt even close to the guy that is just waiting for you. and you will find him, until then use the way you feel to keep writing beautifully.thank you for the comment i love gettting them lol

keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-laura

Hey amazing poem.. the 11:11 really hit home. keep it up
dee