The part that really made me interested was the last two lines. "Just me, myself and I...Oh and my knife"...I read that and I was just thinking "whoa"...That's a really good line =]

Ye i really thought the last 2 lines were great too. overall though it is a good peice, very expressive

Great job with this poem i don't really know what to say. keep writing and thank you for all the comment and i'm glad you enjoy my work :) thanks