Sunny took the words from my mouth great work |
by JJ
I feel very inferior commenting on poems :) ...but whatever Sunny said, I think you did an awesome job! every one of your poems is beautiful. |
by HansRik
This was a wonderful work, Amanda. The Ghazal is a form that few can master, but you have clearly done so. The diction and imagery are fantastic. In brevis, bravo! |
by Angie
Well I have to say Amanda you did a great job mastering the Ghazal form... Its a hard one to write thats for sure, but you did it beautifully....... |
by Bill Turner
WoW! What a beautiful poem....I have never thought of it this way, but it is so damn accurate.....I love it! You are a tremendous poet. |
I love the way you hide the message behind the words in this poem. And the way you expressed how the guy you love has changed - it's remarkable! I voted a 5, keep it up! =) |
Amanda, |
by Katt
Intresting poem. I would like to think that when people do something mean that they are an imposter, too. |
by M J U
Amanda...as always, true depth and inspiration to anyone aspiring to be great. I haven't posted for awhile and just came back to review. Please continue being the greatest achiever I know. Matt |