6 Feet Under

by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu   Jan 21, 2006


You crack joke-I\'m starting to sink
You laugh at me-Deeper I go
You tell me I\'m stupid-I\'m one foot under
You tell me I\'m ugly-Two feet now
You tell me I\'m worthless-Three feet & sinking
You tell everyone else I\'m ugly-Four feet now
You tell everyone else I\'m worthless-Five feet now, don\'t know how much more I can take
You lie to me-&&suddenly the pain is more than I can bare
Finally I break-Six feet under
&& forever gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Ohh this is very unique, you have such talent hun and i do agree with you, relating is the most important part of all and i can definetly relate to your work too, well done,xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu

    I know it's kinda wierd & all but I was in a "i hate the world && everything in it" mood because my best guy friends girlfriend has turned him into a jerk & he thinks it's funny to be rude now....

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Im not much of a Misc..Guy but this one was great jus by the flow and wording...amazing...just..flat out..dead straight amazing
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

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