Your formation,
Makes it hard, to
read, and hard to follow.
If it was done on purpose,
for a poetic effect, I don't
think it worked, much in,
my favours.

See who hard that was to read like that? It makes everything stop and the thoughts disappeared. I read it a second time without stoping and pausing at the commas and periods, and it was much better.

~Atomic

I really just don't know what to say. I love your concepts and I love you words and I love your beliefs. I think that we are "growing up" too soon now a days. I see 12 year olds in middle school wearing oodles of make-up, it disgusts me. Im nearly 16, and I still watch Disney movies. We should all watch disney movies, it would make the world a better place. Anyway, I'm ranting, forgive me. Your words are inspiring, thank you.