Death Won

by Handsdown2010   Jan 22, 2006


You found out how he died,
you don't know how long you've cried.

He used drugs to speed up his mind,
he was trying to finish his work but he was too blind.

He didn't pay attention to how much he took,
he overdosed and didn't finish the book.

Your father betrayed your family and you,
and everybody but you knew.

Nobody told you the truth,
they said he just tripped and rolled off the roof.

Reach
Grab
Stab

You've cut yourself,

Push
Grip
Drip

Driven towards death.

Drip
Drop
Pop

You've popped your vein,

Blood
More
Pour

You feel no pain.

Up
Down
Round

The room starts to spin,

Turn
Twirl
Whirl

You've committed your last sin.

Trip
Flop
Drop

You loose blood and faint,

Black
Deep
Sleep

Covered in red paint.

Dream
Drift
Lift

Your soul lifts up and away,

Pull
Up
Jump

This is your last day.

Sore
Fly
High

High above clouds and wind,

Death
Won
Done

Your life is finally at end.

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  • 16 years ago

    by daniel

    It's really diffrent from alot of the poems out there, they way it was written and the way you used your words, I liked it alot as sad as it was, it was really good

    keep it up

    -daniel

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Yo this is really deep, sort of creeped me out...wow it was amazin I could feel ur pain...loved it!!!